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Inner critic

A modern evidence-informed companion scene: separate a useful request from a global attack on the self.

evidence-informed-self-critic-companion-v1 · MODERN_EVIDENCE_INFORMED · CUSTOMER_SCENE

Useful modern practice; not a Jungian Shadow diagnosis.

When it fits

  • starting is hard because evaluation arrives too early
  • criticism is global—‘I am bad’—rather than specific
  • action needs to return

Not for this

  • replacing facts, medical, legal, or financial advice
  • compulsively repeating the same question
  • reading someone else's life without boundaries

Key images

Editor: edits the text without destroying the author.
Draft: existence first, evaluation second.
Instruction: a concrete change instead of an insult.

How to read this scene

Write the critic's sentence

Record it verbatim without declaring it the voice of Shadow or a diagnosis.

Extract a testable request

If there is a useful task inside it, rewrite it as a concrete action.

Drop the insult

A global attack on identity does not become useful merely because it is internal.

Small practice

Rewrite one critic sentence as: ‘Change ___ by ___’, with no statement about your worth.

This scene is a modern companion practice, not evidence of Jungian Shadow.

Journal questions

What is the concrete request?

Which part of the sentence is an insult?

What is one testable edit?

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